chazzmeere 9 years ago
to tjt5964 : I still dont like this , all 3, you apologize to military, but using nigger nigger nigger dont seem to bother you,,,The word black could have been suffifent enuff,,,White people who use nigger in that way are racist , I know this is porn and usally nothing offends me in porn,, But its just away for the artist to call black people nigger and be justified...Black would have worked fine ...
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By the way I want to clarify that the military setting was chosen specifically because it helps to emphasize the hierarchical difference and the abuse of power by a superior who doesn't deserve the rank. The confrontation could be between a janitor and a manager but visually it wouldn't be the same. No intention to criticize the Military institutions.
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tjt5964 9 years ago
Interesting, but will wait until all the parts are posted to give my review.
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dear chazzmeere, I appreciate your point of view but I don't think you grab the point of the story. The language issue is specifically chosen to characterize a negative person. The problem of a writer or any other visual artist is to give a clear idea of their charcter in few words or immages. In this case an abusive language was the best way and your reaction show me that I did it good. Please wait untill all the other parts of the story before to judge the real meaning of the story.
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